Название: Memo from the Story Department
Автор: Christopher Vogler
Издательство: Ingram
Жанр: Кинематограф, театр
isbn: 9781615930944
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SOMETHING TO THINK ABOUT
What is the one-word theme of your life? What is your one-sentence premise? Is there anything you'd like to change?
What is the one-word theme of your favorite movie or novel? What is its one-sentence premise? Does it expand on the one word, expressing a strong point of view about that human quality?
NOTE FROM McKENNA
Since this book is a two-hander, I'm going to chime in occasionally to comment on Chris's contributions and he will do the same for mine.
Like Chris, I am frequently hired by screenwriting clients to provide critical feedback. Applying the “theme” tool helps me build immediate trust and provide a path forward. When my client knows I understand his/her story on the fundamental level, we have a point of rapport and a launching pad for the re-write process.
Recently a lawyer-turned-screenwriter had me analyze his script about a groundbreaking case he'd argued. His screenplay masterfully described the issues of law, but it felt more like a thoughtful documentary than an emotionally compelling drama.
When we sat down to discuss all this, I told him that his law case had engaged me intellectually but left me hungry for emotional involvement. I needed a tasty theme. We started talking about the themes of our favorite lawyer films (memories of Anatomy of a Murder, Erin Brockovich and The Verdict popped up) and deduced that those movies worked emotionally because the legal arguments had been spiced with transcendent personal stories.
Would the corporate pollution case in Erin Brockovich matter to us if it didn't include the thematic collision between trailer trash Erin and her upscale, uptight colleagues? David Mamet posits a good case of medical neglect in The Verdict. But his story stays with us because a boozy defense lawyer is fighting the uncaring system to redeem his very soul.
My client and I were sniffing out this sort of theme when he mentioned something amazing. He admitted that handling the case introduced him to a level of responsibility that he'd never experienced before. Bingo!
Could this theme of responsibility exist in all the threads of the script? Indeed it could. In fact, that theme seemed to be waiting at all points to see if we'd be smart enough to find it. Bingo, Part Two!
Once we enticed our theme out of its hiding place, our new approach took care of itself. The script would no longer be a mere play-by-play about a legal question: it became a series of dramatic showdowns forcing the characters to confront their personal responsibilities for the conditions of their lives.
Within a few weeks, my client completed a new draft: a taut legal thriller about a groundbreaking lawsuit that transforms the lives of almost everyone involved in it. We used a very simple tool to elevate fact into drama.
CHAPTER TWO
THE “WANT” LIST
—— McKENNA ——
“ There are three rules to writing, and nobody knows what they are.”
—W. Somerset Maugham
This is a quote from one of the twentieth century's best storytellers, and I use it to keep myself humble as a teacher. I don't know how anyone creates art. It's a mystery that requires inspiration, hard work and something indefinable that can't be learned by following rules from a book (I can hear my publisher groaning).
Thankfully, craftsmanship (if not artistry) can be taught. It has hard rules that become malleable under an artist's touch. So a wise artist goes through “basic training” with those rules before toying with them.
However, it seems to be the way of the world that uninitiated would-be artists dive right in without submitting to this “basic training” in craftsmanship.
My drama school classmates and I were not particularly wise in the matter of training. We were acting students, filled with passionate impulses and skeptical about the need for wisdom. We would perform scenes for our teacher, filled with youthful brio and good intentions. Most of our work was pretty crappy.
Having suffered through our work, that teacher would begin each critique session with a simple question: “What does your character want?” Dozens of scenes would be performed throughout the semester, and the question was posed every single time. Without fail, the response was a lot of hemming and hawing from us students. We were pretty hilarious in our insistent ignorance.
It's a legacy that continues. I've taught my share of acting classes and have seen hundreds of acting scenes. As my teachers did before me, I almost always ask: “What do you want here?” As I and my classmates did decades ago, my students look at their shoes and mumble something along the lines of “I dunno.”
So, in the name of basic training in craftsmanship, I want you and I (mostly you) to make up a list of “wants.” Since we know that the question will be asked every single time, we will look like “A” students if we at least have some sort of answer.
So, what do people “want”? We can start with the basics: food, clothing, shelter. Can we make up a story about these basic desires? I don't see why not. Isn't the desire for all three the issue that drives the heroes of Blake Edwards' Victor/Victoria?
We can open things up from there. Alcoholics want booze; just ask Nicholas Cage from Leaving Las Vegas. Sinners want redemption. Almost all of us yearn for love and recognition. Braveheart's William Wallace laid it all on the line for freedom and, after all these years, Mick Jagger still can't get no satisfaction.
In case we've forgotten, Cyndi Lauper informs us that girls just want to have fun.
In fact, pop songs are a virtual textbook of “wants.” The kids from Fame “want to live forever.” Aretha wants R-E-S-P-E-C-T, and in Some Like It Hot, Marilyn Monroe wants to “be loved by you, just you and nobody else but you.” In Marilyn's case, it looks like a sweet yen. But give it to Glenn Close in Fatal Attraction, and the simple “want” gets downright scary.
Michael Corleone wants family, and he's willing to kill to secure it. That's his tragedy, right? How many of us just yearn for a mate and kids? What dramatic action would we take to acquire such things?
It's probably not polite to say so, but most of us are willing to make damned fools of ourselves to fulfill our sexual “wants.” And how about the supporting character in Mary Chase's comedy Harvey who just wants to sit under a tree with some beer and a girl who pats his hand saying “there, there”? It doesn't seem like much, but it feeds an entire “B” plot.
Money drives most of us to some degree or other, and James Bond wouldn't have much to do unless an endless stream of bad guys wanted to dominate the world. James himself seems satisfied with a bottomless supply of exotic cigarettes, devastating femme fatales and martinis shaken, not stirred. Come to think of it, I want those things, too.
Sports teams want to win championships, and hundreds of films record what they sacrifice to accomplish it.
Almost every Broadway musical opens with an “I want” song. It's the anthem declaring the hero's desire that will be shaped and tested by the ensuing action. Belle from Beauty and СКАЧАТЬ