Field Guide to Covering Sports. Joe Gisondi

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СКАЧАТЬ sports stories, even if they watched the game and know the outcome: Reporters add to readers’ understanding by asking questions and finding out things no one could know just by looking.

      A good quote takes you inside the speaker’s head and helps you see the world through different eyes. The next chapter, about interviewing, provides tips on getting people to talk to you. Once they do, learn to distinguish a good quote from a mediocre one. The fact that someone said something to you and you managed to record the words exactly does not make the quote worth using. A good quote must do more than take up space—it must advance the story. A good quote is either a unique thought or a thought expressed in unique language.

      Here’s Indians’ outfielder Shin-Soo Choo offering insights into Jered Weaver, who pitched a shutout against the Angels: “He was using his fastball early and then throwing his changeup and curveball in hitters’ counts. He was hitting the inside corner and the outside corner.”¹⁴

      How did Jelena Jankovic blow three match points to nearly lose to Elena Dementieva in the finals of a women’s tennis event? “I couldn’t believe, you know, that I was able to win this match,” Jankovic said. “At 5–4 and three match points on my serve, I thought I was going to win right there. And then all of a sudden, she was going for broke on those points and she took her chances. It was tough for me to accept that I lost that game.”¹⁵

      Both quotes allow readers to get inside an athlete’s head.

      West Virginia football coach Bill Stewart relies on clichés in the following quote, which offers no insights into the team’s season: “It’s going to be a long grind,” Stewart said. “It’s going to be 12 hard-fought games, but it’s going to be great for college football and great for this league.”¹⁶ What will be the biggest challenge for the season? How will the team cope with a difficult schedule? Ask questions to solicit quotes that are worth reading.

      And in the following quote, what exactly did Alabama football coach Nick Saban really say about his team’s preseason workout? “It was good to get the first scrimmage behind us. It was good to see guys go out there in competitive situations, and see who could step their game up. Obviously, those guys who have a little more experience, have more playing time behind them and a little more confidence usually have a better opportunity to be successful.”¹⁷ Saban says very little beyond the obvious.

      Don’t waste space with quotes unless they offer new information, expert opinion—or are entertaining. At times, you may even want to lead with an entertaining quote:

       ▸ Miami coach Pat Riley after his team, then 11–46, won, to end an 11-game losing streak: “I feel like a mosquito in a nudist colony. I know what to do. I just don’t know where to start.”¹⁸

       ▸ Boston Celtics coach Doc Rivers when asked how many more games Kevin Garnett would miss with a strained abdominal muscle: “You know Doc’s a nickname, correct?”¹⁹

       ▸ PGA Tour player Rory Sabbatini: “Lick the lollipop of mediocrity once and you’ll suck forever.”²⁰

       ▸ Bowling Green football coach Gregg Brandon after his team lost 63–7 to Tulsa in the GMAC Bowl: “I don’t know what happened. We were out of it before we were in it.”²¹

      Language

      Paint a picture. Let readers see what happened. Don’t write that a tailback scored on a 25-yard run, something anybody can write from reading a box score. Instead, show how the tailback made it into the end zone.

      Let readers see key passes: “The key play was Cutler’s 38-yard pass to lanky receiver Devin Aromashodu. Cutler perfectly placed the pass as Aromashodu stretched out in front of Giants cornerback Bruce Johnson. It gave the Bears first-and-goal from the 1.”²²

      Vivid language also enables readers to visualize key plays like this: “That’s when Stroughter, the 233rd pick in April, took over. He took a kickoff at the 5, spun out of some tackles and raced down the sideline until he was pushed out of bounds at the Jaguars 20. Two plays later, McCown fired a 17-yard touchdown to tight end Jerramy Stevens.”²³

      Notice the active verbs used in both passages above—stretched, raced, pushed and fired. These verbs enable the reader to more clearly imagine what happened. Avoid passive voice—avoid using was, were, is, and are, because the resulting wordier constructions often replace or weaken more visual verbs.

      In addition, vary sentences for style and length. Mix longer sentences with shorter ones. Insert phrases and clauses at the beginning, middle, and end of sentences—although not all at once. Don’t lull readers to sleep with sentences that all sound the same, sort of like the tide rhythmically slapping against the side of a dock. On the other hand, too many short, rapid-fire sentences can jolt readers. Take chances, try different punctuation: Do whatever it takes to grab readers’ attention (and retain it throughout the story).

      Story Scan: Breaking Down A Game Story

       On deadline, sports writers rarely have time to develop a longer theme-based story. Instead, they address key plays, trends, and stats, while recording who won and lost. Later versions of the story, something Associated Press calls “write-thrus,” may include a feature approach, telling the story behind the final outcome. That’s always a good idea. Readers can get the basic information from many sources, so look for stories that reveal something more about the game. Matt Daniels, at the time a senior at Eastern Illinois University, wrote the following story for The Daily Eastern News after a football game.

       But, first, let’s review some elements in all stories—characters, setting, plot, and point of view, all driven by conflict. In sports, the larger conflict is clear—one team wants to defeat another. But what about those smaller conflicts? The rookie offensive guard matched up against the all-conference defensive end. The quarterback playing against the team that once cut him, thinking he was too old. The volleyball libero diving for kill shots with a broken left wrist. The golfer with a degenerative leg ailment struggling to play during the final holes. Or in the story below, a rookie running back forced to play after the star runner gets injured in a key conference game. The stories are endless if you do the research and cover a beat diligently.

      HEADLINE: Adeniji Gives Warrior Effort

      BYLINE: Matt Daniels, Eastern Illinois University

      

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